Ludwig application

[ludlud]

Character Name: Ludwig Beilschmidt
Class: Knight
Job: //
Level: 1
Alliance: Order
PvP Kills: //
PvE Kills: //
Quests Complete: //
IC Post Count: //
Ability List: //
Inventory: great sword, small crossbow + darts (10), chain mail

Why he picked the order side:

Ludwig is rational. He has a strong practical sense and believes in the strong connection of the relation cause/effect. He's ready and willing to deal with any problem, and will probably solve it as long as he can rely on a manual containing clear instructions.
All that part of the world concerning feelings is still relatively unknown to him, but if any of those problems will one day upset him, he'll probably try to face them in the same way he faces all the others.

RP Sample:

Ludwig was known for being a very serious person, one of those people whose feet were firmly anchored to the ground and who didn't leave too much space for imagination in their head.
But this kind of serious people just didn't wake up one day to find themselves in the middle of an unknown town, with no idea about what town it was and how the hell they had managed to get there… which was exactly what was happening to Ludwig.

He had woken up a few hours earlier, and found himself laying on the bench in the middle of a small square. A square he had never seen before.
He had wandered around for a while, trying to figure out where he was, but he was sure he had never seen those streets before. The name of the town itself wasn't familiar at all - if they had mentioned it him the day before, he would have answered that such a town didn't exist. But apparently, he was in that town now, without the faintest idea about how he had gotten here.

It wasn't normal, sure, but it was a fact, Ludwig had to admit: he was pretty sure he wasn't dreaming, he had never had such a real dream, not even after the huge amount of beer he had consumed the night before. He had considered the option that someone might have assaulted or kidnapped him during the night (who would do that and why, he had no idea, but still, he needed to evaluate all possibilities) but he was still wearing all his clothes, and the few coins he owned were still in his pockets. And besides, he knew well all the towns in the area where he lived, and he was sure he had never seen this one before.

Or maybe he was hallucinating, there could have been some kind of drug in the beer he had drunk and now he was under its effect… but he believed hallucinations involved stuff such as green unicorns or talking trees, and so far the town he was walking in seemed rather normal.

So, even if it was weird, the fact that he had found himself in such a strange situation was, again, a fact, and Ludwig liked facts; reality was made of concrete facts, as concrete as the walls of the houses in that town, so there had to be a perfectly rational explanation to everything, even if he couldn't work it out for now.

At least, people there seemed to be friendly, for now; as a young warrior, he believed that steel - and in particular, his trusty sword - was the answer to many of the problems life could present. Not that he liked violence, quite the opposite, instead, but the world he lived in wasn't a friendly place. One had to fight and defeat or be defeated, and Ludwig didn't like the second option.

Then again, the town seemed a quite nice place, and the beer of the inn he had stopped by tasted good. Which was a fact, and a very positive one.

[Gilbert Beilschmidt]

The app is good but I has trouble reading some of the RP sample. I'll accept you but please edit the sample section of the app so that it's easier to understand. =u= Other then that, good work. I thought you captured Ludwig's personality well.
ALSO can you change to chaos? Just because well, we could kinda use more on that side. That and you'd have to team with Lovino otherwise and that would make for constant bitching. Your choice really.

[ludlud]

Ok.. I edited it a bit, I added a paragraph in the beginning since maybe I didn't clarify enough what had just happened to the character.
Was that the part which wasn't clear? Anyway tell me if there are other points I need to rewrite.

Yeah I wasn't sure whether he should join order or chaos.
Actually, I find Ludwig is more the order kind of character, but if you think that it would be more useful if he joined the chaos part for me is fine as well.
I also thought that having him and Romano by the same side would be interesting to develop, because they would have to work together even if they can't stand each other XD
And I thought that having the two brothers on different sides (Lud order and Gil chaos) could lead to other interesting developments as well, but again, if you don't agree I can easily change and I'm sure the story will be just as interesting~

[Gilbert Beilschmidt]

I think you managed to edit the sentence or two that I really got stuck on. That or I was really tired at the time. SeeingasIdomostshitpastnaptimethere'sareallygoodpossibilityofthelatter.
I dunno, I'm probably being hypocritical, but really it was having so many long sentences with commas everywhere. I found it hard to read cause some of the sentences has some non sequitur ideas mashed together. =3='' But like I said, I think it's good now.

I hope when you say more order kinda character you don't mean a good guy. Cause if you did I'd have to kick you. Really. Order characters could be total evil douche bags as well. Like Lovino. And I suppose the character interaction would be more interesting.

[ludlud]

Ok! Yeah I was very tired when I wrote it so I probably messed it up a bit, sorry ^^'

No no, I meant order. I edited the application with the part explaining why.

[Gilbert Beilschmidt]

........ I do not get your rational as to why you chose order. Ummm.....
/fails at a polite way to say this next bit/
.....T-Try again. D:" Read the bit about alliances in the necessities section of the board. I think it's just above or below the class list. Cause even if you have to copypasta Order or Chaos's platform then at least I know that you kinda know what alliances are about. ;;;;